I'm back and I've a cute little crew this time with me..! Including Sudheeksh, Sampath and Namrata. As I said earlier, to bring a little change to our blog I have added these three young fellows to the blog. I will write in detail about each of them some other time. Am sure you all will like them as I do...!
Now to begin with, Sudheeksh came up with this nice idea of one person writing a story and the rest continuing it. I and the other two were also excited about the idea and Sudheeksh started doing it straight away.
Here is the first part of The story Disguised, which will be later continued by himself..!
Sudheeksh has written the first part, and my first reaction to him was "Superb..!". The flow in the story kept me in it all the time I read it.
Hope you all will love and nurture our blog the way you've been doing it.
Disguised
Episode-1:
“Get up Sandu baba!! How long are you going to sleep? It’s already 11 and
you haven’t eaten anything since yesterday noon. COME ON, GET UP AT ONCE!!”His
mother yelled from kitchen. She was worried about him. He was acting weird from
past few days. She had her guesses. But, she dared not to fire them on his
face. Well, coming back to the point here, Sandesh had locked himself inside
his room from past two days, lying on his bed but still awake. His face was
deep buried between the pillows. He was trying hard to sleep and trying even
harder to forget what had dug his heart out. But, he couldn’t. His eyes were
swollen as he was crying continuously till there was no single droplet left in
his eyes. He was too tired to even switch sides while sleeping. Yet, he couldn’t
get a wince. He was haunted by the devil that left no one in their lifetime,
LOVE!!
Sandesh wasn’t like this before. He was a jolly soul. He believed every
moment of the life should be welcomed with a broad smile. He always made sure
that people around him would never get hurt by him. He always stood by the
needy. If anyone was in some trouble and needed a helping hand, there was
Sandesh, holding their hand. He had the ability to make even a stone smile. He
was as innocent as a child. Yet, thoughtful.
He had lost his mother when he was 8. And his father, Shankar remarried
his wife’s younger sister, Savita so that his young son would never grow
lacking a mother’s love. But, that act of his had cost him his son. Sandesh had
never spoken to his father since then. Even though he never spoke to his
father, they all had to stay under same roof as they wanted to grow old in the
house in Bengaluru that treasured the memories of Sandesh’s mother. His father
made sure that his presence would never irritate his son.
Sandesh was a bright student. He
had tried hard to get settled as a software engineer in his dream company, the
Microsoft. He had the dream to open an orphanage and get lost between the
giggles of those innocent children. All he wanted was a bit taste of love. His
life was going steady and smooth. And when his life stage was set for the
biggest thing to happen, she entered his life, Adhya.
It was just like every other day
in early rainy season, cool and cloudy, hard to tell when it would rain. As it
was a Monday, all the streets were crowded with office cabs, school vans,
private vehicles and public transports. Sandesh was also in his office cab with
his colleague, Nidhi. And then, Zeus started his play. All of a sudden it
started to rain heavily, with thunders and lightening.
“Damn! Not now!” Sandesh frowned.
“What Sandesh?! Still afraid of lightening?
Wanna run back home and hide under blanket?” teased Nidhi, watching Sandesh’s
face.
“Huh!? No dear, I’m just worried about what
follows next”, groaned Sandesh.
“And what’s that?”
“You’ll see, if you’re lucky enough” his
face mocking with a smile.
Just as he finished saying that, their cab
broke down in the middle of the road with sudden jerks.
“Oh!! Not again!!” shouted Ramu, the cab
driver.
“What happened Ramu dada?” asked Nidhi,
worried.
“Yup, that’s what I was talking about” said
Sandesh calmly.
“What!? You knew it would happen?” Nidhi
asked with surprise.
“Yes mam. Everyone in this town have the
ability to predict this worst scenario. Don’t worry, you’ll get used to it” he
replied, still maintaining his calm mind.
Now Nidhi became aware why Sandesh was
worried earlier. There is no chance of getting another cab at this peak hour
and even the rickshaw-walas would act lazy and demanding when it rained.
“Can you check once Ramu dada?” asked Nidhi
in a pleading tone.
“Yeah, sure” agreeing to Nidhi’s request, he
got out quite hastily. Murmuring something he went out in the rain, opened the
cab’s bonnet and tried to locate the problem. He returned after a couple of
minutes, completely soaked in rain.
“I couldn’t find any problem. I’ll have to
take it to a nearby garage and get it repaired. Those idiots, resting in A.C.
rooms can’t even send this piece of shit to a regular service....”
He then started scolding the authority
responsible for cab maintenance. Sandesh and Nidhi ignored him. They knew their
ears might bleed if they listen to his holy words. As soon as he was done with
expressing his anger, both of them got down from the cab and hurried to a
nearby bus stop to get cover from the rain. They waited there for a bus to take
them to office. That bus stop was a bit too crowded already. They were all
waiting for something to travel by and reach their respected destination in
time. Time passed on and the intensity of the rain started to decrease. After
sometime it stopped completely and the sun managed to find his way through the
clouds.
They were still waiting at the
bus stop. Then, Sandesh noticed Rishab, his colleague and Nidhi’s boyfriend,
riding his KTM Duke. Sandesh was now sure that he’ll have to travel to office
alone. I mean, who’ll leave his girlfriend to wait for a bus with someone else
and ride alone in such a romantic weather? That’s what hit Sandesh’s mind. As
he approached closer, he saw Sandy (as his colleagues say) and angel in the bus
stop. He was kind of surprised to see them both in that place, especially
Nidhi. He had offered Nidhi earlier to ride with him to office and the way back
home. But, she had to decline it as her orthodox parents would never allow her
to ride with a guy in a motor cycle that makes the back seated person to lean
completely over the rider. Rishab pulled over his vehicle in front of his
colleagues. Nidhi hadn’t seen him approach. Her face beamed as she saw Rishab’s
face. She had thought of calling him. But, had dropped the idea thinking he
might be stuck in traffic. And, there he was, right in front of her.
“What’re you guys doing here? Aren’t you two
supposed to be in your cab?” asked Rishab, trying to know the problem. That’s
the thing about us Indians. After using things frequently, we believe it
belongs to us: my cab, my bank, my office.
Sandesh waited for Nidhi to answer. But, she
was lost in her thoughts, dreaming about Rishab. So, he replied, “We were
buddy. But, that piece of junk broke down mid-way. So, we had to get down and
come here to get a bus to reach office in time”.
Dripping droplets from the roof of the bus
stop broke Nidhi’s chain of thoughts. She now boosted with enthusiasm.
“Forget it!! It’s getting late, let’s go”
hurried Nidhi.
“How?” asked Sandesh.
“What do you mean by ‘how’!? We have a bike
for god’s sake” exclaimed Nidhi, completely forgetting the point.
“And there are THREE of us. I don’t want to
break traffic rules. Besides, we three can’t fit in this bike. One has to stay
back and let the other ride” explained Sandesh.
Nidhi fell silent, although she had
something in her mind. Sandesh laughed inside. He broke silence, “Come on guys,
don’t act like dumbos! I’ll get a bus. You two love birds carry on” patting on
Rishab’s shoulder. All three of them laughed out loud. Nidhi got on the bike
and wrapped her arms around Rishab. She planted a kiss on his neck and held him
tight. They both smiled at Sandesh and in a flash they were gone.
Sandesh sighed looking at
the crowd standing in the bus stop, dumped just like him. Then he gazed at the
sky. But, suddenly he looked back at the crowd and started to find something.
After trying for few second, he found what he was looking for, a young fine
lady. There she was, standing in the bus stop, half wet. All of a sudden the
world around him appeared to move in slow motion. He felt he was standing alone
with that lady. He kept staring at her. Those pair of eyes had really caught
his attention, carved like lotus petals and flickering like butterflies. She
was wearing a simple dress, very less makeup, yet gorgeous. Her hair was smooth
and silky. It was dancing with the wind. She was brushing it back, behind her
ears every now and then. But, it never listened to her. It soon found its way
back on her face and started to cuddle her cheek. She became irritated by this
routine. She took out a clip from her bag and tucked her hair. Sandesh smiled
looking at all these dramas. She suddenly had a feeling that somebody is
watching her and looked in the way of the eyes staring at her. It startled
Sandesh. He moved his eyes off her. There was a playful smile on her face,
seeing Sandesh’s reaction which he didn’t see. But, soon it evaded and was
replaced by a flattened line of worry of getting late. Her lips were moving
restless, still hugging each other tight not even letting the air to pass
between them. Uncontrollably, Sandesh started looking at her once again, this
time more alert not to get caught.
“Wow..!! God might have taken years to
create her!!” he thought to himself.
He tried hardtop take his gaze off her, but
failed. He was completely lost in her. Then, she started to move with the
crowd, noticing a bus approach. In hurry, accidently her arm rubbed against his.
He felt a shock wave running across his entire body for few seconds. When he
was back to his senses, he realized he had not only missed her but also missed
the bus.
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